Sunday, 19 November 2017

OUGD504 - Final Crit Feedback

Final Crit Feedback

For the final crit I showed the group the video which I had made on XD and also ran through it on XD page by page so they could understand the way in which it would function and also get a feel for the design. The feedback which I got was as follows:

Like:

  • The clean, neat and minimalistic design works well for the brand and its style.
  • Its really clean and functions well.
  • The layout is good and gives the impression of a luxury brand.
  • Very nice and Sleek design.
  • Love the full page bleed of the images on the home page. 
  • The use of colour and simple style is perfect, it makes the website look high end and classy.
  • The navigation is good!
  • The minimal style works so well for the branding.
  • The minimal style definitely reflects luxury.
  • Really like the layout.
Possible Improvements:
  • Look at making it more obvious why this brand is better than others... the bamboo. 
  • Add subtle aspects that reference the use of bamboo for the material of the underwear - leaves, maybe more colour, bamboo stick, simplistic panda illustration. 
  • Maybe look at a textured background?

My response to the feedback:

I was really pleased with the feedback as everyone seemed to like the minimalistic style and thought it was very representative of the brand which was what I needed. I want to experiment with some of the suggestions that were made about making a connection to the bamboo. However as it is a high end brand I don't want it to end up looking tacky as this would become unrepresentative of the company. 

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