Final Crit - Screen Print

Final Crit:

• Really like how the words in bold with the blink read out something that makes sense, it makes the print interactive.
• The 2 different layers of paper makes the print more interesting and different.
• The event is something different and unexpected. 
• The print reflects the events.
• Very strong concept, works very well.
• Maybe have the tissue paper cut in some places to reveal the print below?
• Really like the overlaid top however is there a reason for the colour?
• Strong concept, good use of eyes to link to the boy being paralysed.
• Nice type and use of material.
• Maybe look at a lighter colour?
• Lovely idea, how will you attach the tissue to the print?
• The faded eyelashes work really well to look dilute which corresponds with the use of tissue. 
• Good strong concept, especially the use of tracing paper/tissue paper, multiple layers works really well.
• Make sure you make it clear in your rationale the relevance of the second layer/colour.