Wednesday, 10 May 2017

Group Project - Second Crit

Feedback:

- The blackletter doesn't convey the fact that its and exhibition. Try a more contemporary typeface.
- Letter press?
- Black doesnt work
- Hands need to be more handmade
- How does it work with the gallery?
- Need to be more consistent with output. Make it clear what the identity is.
- Bright colours work well but narrow it down.
- The hands are friendly and fun.
- Blackletter doesn't reflect the fun and friendly nature of the other designs.
- Hands in pencil? - Might add more texture
- Making the typeface might be too much work?
- Use the hands to create the picture/process of a screen print, monoprint, etc? - different hand movements.
- Hands are easily understood by everyone - works well.

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